について - Grammar Discussion

English translation:
concerning
about
regarding

Structure:
Noun + について
Noun1 + についての + Noun2

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What’s the difference/nuance between that and just using plain old “wa” particle ?

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In example #9, “I will give you the documents regarding the details.”, the official answer is:
詳細について書いてある書類をお渡しします。

I entered についての, and it was marked wrong. But isn’t “書いてある書類” a noun (or noun phrase, or whatever it’s supposed to be called, with a verb modifying a noun, so essentially a noun)?

Reading the English translation, it seems more clear that it’s a Noun ‘regarding’ another Noun, which is why I thought that would be the right way to answer it. But maybe I’m missing something distinct about Japanese grammar that makes it work differently?

Any tips? Is there an issue with the example, or is it just my misunderstanding?

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I just checked with a Japanese friend and she said it was unnatural. I personally thought it was OK too so I’ve learned something today. Sorry I can’t explain the grammar because until now I thought your answer was ok :joy:

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Thanks. :slight_smile:

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Is anyone able to clarify why についての is unnatural in that example? I had the same assumption about the answer as wct, and I’m having a hard time understanding why it was wrong.

Is についての ALWAYS wrong before nouns that are modified by verbs, or is there another rule that determines which nouns take についての? Or is this particular sentence just a weird exception?

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To me the version with についての sounds like we’re talking about documents that were written by someone (書いてある書類) and also, independently, concern the details (詳細についての書類) because with the の it can only modify the next noun directly. I’m not Japanese though.

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@nekoyama @gillian-faith @wct @matt_in_mito

When a verb follows, について should be generally used.
についての modifies a noun or noun phrase. So:

詳細について書いてある書類をお渡しします OK (verb follows)

詳細についての書類をお渡しします OK (noun follows)

詳細について短い書類をお渡しします OK (noun phrase 短い書類 follows)

Generally, those noun phrases are short and made from one いadjective or なadjective modifying noun. (because longer noun phrases are kind of hard to understand)
Like:

についての一般的な説明

についての簡単な説明

についての詳しい説明

You can sometimes, of course, see についてのnoun phrase with a verb (rarely compared to について + verb)
後の文では特別な様子や状況についての話す人の観察を言う。
but many speakers will think of them as unnatural, and instead, would advise to change that についての to について.
後の文では特別な様子や状況について、話す人の観察を言う。

I hope it helps a bit :+1:
Cheers

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