Not bad! Great work. I will use this resource regularly.
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Thanks! Iโm glad to hear it 
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ใดใผในใใๅนปใๅนฝ้โฆ ๅใฎๅ ดๅใฏๆฐใใใฎใไบไฝๆฎบใใใฎใ ใใใใ
Translation / ่ฑ่จณ
Ghosts, illusions, spectersโฆ in my case, I wonder if Iโll be able to slay the two new ones.
ๆ่ฟใ่ฆใใชใใฒใผใ ใ่ฒทใฃใฆใฐใใใใใพใ้ๆใกใใใชใใฎใซโฆ
Translation
Recently, Iโve been doing nothing but buying games I donโt need. Even though I donโt have all that much moneyโฆ
ใณใใฉใ่ธใใใใฎใใใซใใซใผใใๅนใ็ฟใฃใใ
Translation
I learned to play the flute to make the cobras dance.
ๆๆฅใฏ8ๆใซๆใ้ฃฏใ้ฃในใใคใใใ
่ฑ่ช
Tomorrow, I intend to eat breakfast at 8 oโclock.
ๅใฎ้ซชใใพใ ใณใใใณใใใชใใงใใใใฉใคใคใผใงไนพใใฆใใใงใชใใจใๅบใใใพใใ
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ใชใ ใใพใซใใๆใๅใฃใฆใโฆ ๅใซใใฃใจๅ จ็ถๆใใใใชใใฃใใใ ใโฆ
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ใใใใใใๆใใชใใฃใใใ ใใจ่จใฃใใใใๆญฃใใใชใ๏ผ
ใ ใฃใฆใใๆใใใโใๆใใชใใโใๆใใชใใฃใใโ ใชใฉ
Welcome to BunPro!
You have a pretty good sentence here, but I noticed you misused the grammar point ใใฆใใใงใชใใจใใThe issue is the final part of the sentence,
When using ใใฆใใใงใชใใจใใthe phrase/statement has to be a negative. Right now, the sentence sounds like โIf (you) do not dry (your hair) using the hair dryer, (we) can go out.โ as opposed to โIf (you) do not dry (your hair) using the hair dryer, (we) cannot go out.โ
An easy solution to this would be to change
ใๅบใใใพใใโใๅบใใใพใใใ
Can go out โ Canโt go out.
I had to research a whole new grammatical term I havenโt learned to understand this, so I hope this can help you on your learning journey as well!
ใใโฆ ่ชคๅญใใใฃใใใ ใๅฎ้ใซใๆใใใใใใจใใใฎใฏ้ฃใใใใฃใใใ ใใงใใใๆใใใใจๅงใใๅฐคใใๆใใใใใใซๅคใใฃใใ
ใใใๆไผใใฆใใใฆใใใใจใใ
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ใใใใใใใใ๏ผ
ใงใโฆไปใใๆใใใใใใซใชใฃใกใใฃใใใ โฆ
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ๆธใ็ดใใ๏ผใใไธๅบฆใใใใใจใใ
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ใใใใๅคงไธๅคซใใ ใฃใฆใ้ข็ฝใwใใจๆใฃใใใ
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ใ็ฟป่จณใใฎๆญใ่ดใใใฎ?
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ใ็ฟป่จณใใฎๆญใฃใฆใใใจใใฟใปใธใงใคใ ใบใใฎๆฒ๏ผๆใซ่ดใใใใจใใใฃใฆใ็ด ๆตใชๆฒใ ใจๆใใใ ใใฉใๆ่ฟใใพใ่ดใใชใใฃใใใ ใ
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ใใใ ใใใจใใฟใปใธใงใคใ ใบใใฎๆฒใ ใ็ด ๆดใใใใฆ้ข็ฝใใญ๏ผๅคงๅฅฝใใ ใใ
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ใใใญใใใใๆๅใชๆฒใ ใญใ
ใงใใใใฎๆฒใฎๆญ่ฉใ็ฟป่จณใใฆไฝฟใฃใฆใๆฅๆฌ่ชใฎๆใ็ใฟๅบใใใๅคฉๆใใใ๏ผ
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ๅฝผๅฅณใฏๅฝผใซไบๅบฆใจ้ขไฟใใใฃใฆใปใใใชใใฃใใใ ใฃใฆใใฉใใใใใใโฆ
Translation / ่ฑ่จณ
She said she didnโt want to have anything to do with him ever again.I wonder I wonder what happenedโฆ
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ใๅใๆฐใใ่ปใงใใ๏ผ ใใใฎ็ท่ฒใ็พใใใงใใใ ๆฉ้็ฎใซไปใใ ใ
Translation
Hey, is that your new car? The green color of it is beautiful. It immediately caught my eye.
Corrections welcomed & appreciated!
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